I mentioned previously that I engaged in a voice experiment by participating in the ACFW 2009 Genesis Contest. I saw this as a great opportunity to get feedback on my writing voice. This post contains the first chapter of an entry entitled “Drop Bled” aka “Andall’s Messiah” that I submitted to the Mystery/Suspense/Thriller category. It’s also the entry that I finaled with in that category.
It’s a story that has hounded me at every turn and I’m quite enamored with it. Imagine for a moment if you will, the following:
What happens when a miraculously gifted soul wants to trade that gifting in for a simpler life and an equally depraved soul would kill to get it?
Enter God, who’s not done yet. Epic struggle … and there’s a girl involved too.
Pursuit – Boy goes after girl, God goes after boy, Thug wants it all. Somebody’s going to drop … bled or dead … before the night is through.
I invite you to click the link below to download and read the PDF version of this Suspense entry. Once you click the link you’ll be taken to another page … click the link there to get the actual PDF file for viewing. Enjoy!
